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| Topic Started: Apr 26 2010, 11:44 AM (621 Views) | |
| Gorvar | May 10 2010, 02:06 PM Post #11 |
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Yes, my obscure pop culture reference has found it's mark! |
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| LoganActor | May 11 2010, 05:59 PM Post #12 |
Plays Logan on TV!
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Great update. Good to see that X-Force is doing good, even though they're not working for Chuck anymore. Bothans...classic. I was expecting Pete to stand up and say "IT'S A TRAP!" sometime in the story. |
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| LoganActor | May 11 2010, 05:59 PM Post #13 |
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Plays Logan on TV!
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Great update. Good to see that X-Force is doing good, even though they're not working for Chuck anymore. Bothans...classic. I was expecting Pete to stand up and say "IT'S A TRAP!" sometime in the story. |
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| Gorvar | May 12 2010, 04:24 AM Post #14 |
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Thanks for the reply dude! Still I feel like I only gave a 2D feel of Doom. True he is a villain, but I feel like I should've done something more with him, a more human side... GLad ya liked it and let's see how his will tie in with your crossover with Cat. |
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| LoganActor | May 12 2010, 10:32 AM Post #15 |
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Plays Logan on TV!
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Hmm...Not exactly 2D. You just had a lot going on. It's hard to make your villains original and exciting when you have so many people to deal with. |
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| Gorvar | May 12 2010, 10:52 AM Post #16 |
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Point. There is this fic going on in the Marvel boards called 'Currents: Fantastic Four' where the author, wonderfull lady, writes a excellent Victor von Doom and gave him a perfect backstory. When i compare him to my Doctor Doom i feel as if i'm insulting her with my rather shallow Doctor Doom. I'll try to make him more believible later on. |
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