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| Anne | May 5 2009, 05:30 PM Post #61 |
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That sound interesting! You know I'd love to read it! 
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| Gorvar | May 5 2009, 06:04 PM Post #62 |
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Preview The Children of the Vault have returned, uniting alongside the X-men most hated and dangerious enemies...the purifiers! Their goal? To kidnap young Beca, Minotaur's daughter!!! With the more powerfull members of the team gone, it's up to the rest of the X-men to protect the little girl from evil hands. The Spectacular X-men closing the Vault chapter 2 Coming tommorow only on wolverine files: forums! |
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| Gorvar | May 6 2009, 06:02 PM Post #63 |
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Closing the Vault’ Part 2 of 4. Written by Gorvar Edited by Templedog Unique forum Characters created by Templedog, Gorvar, Brian Knippenberg and Anne. X-men and other Marvel characters belong to Marvel. Earth’s only hope is something Spectacular. Team Roster Anthony Durgrath aka Loam: can turn himself into the element earth. George Gargan aka Time-Warrior: limited manipulation of space and time. Aurick Taylor aka Qwerty: ability to hack and control any computer system. Brooke Davis aka Tranq: can calm down the enemy into a false sense of security. Gabriel Harrison aka Bolgani: can turn into a great white ape. Jason Traq aka Minotaur: Can turn into a beast with incredible power. Molly Dylan aka Sprite: Can manipulate water. Logan aka Wolverine: adamantium claws and healing factor Hank Mccoy aka Beast: Genius intellect and acrobatic skills. Laura aka X-23: Clone of wolverine with same skills Wade Wilson aka Deadpool: Mercenary with healing factor. Becca Traq: Targeted by the Purifier/ Children of the Vault alliance. What happened previously: Recently dangerous super powered weapons appeared all over New York, their new owners wrecking havoc. The New avengers found the source off the supplies, discovering most of the new weapons were armours from the Children of the Vault, a enemy the X-men thought to have dealt with a year ago. Despite Cyclops’s objections, a group of x-men (Time-Warrior, Wolverine, X-23, Loam and Deadpool) went to investigate a clue leading to Ecuador. The moment the group left however, the dark alliance of the Children and the Purifiers attacked the X-men hq in San Francesco, apparently targeting Becca, a young mutant girl and daughter of Jason Traq aka Minotaur, but why? Closing the Vault Part 2: New plan. Ecuador coast 20 seconds after crash-landing Blood was scattered all over the sand beneath them, limbs and heads following soon after. They were ambushed, tricked, but they still held their own. The X-men, the best mutant kind has to offer. Their foes fell like flies, standing no chance against their wrath. ‘Logan, we need to get over here!’ Tw cried out over the shouts, embedding his sword in the skull of a purifier. Wolverine nodded, his claws having turned completely red moments ago. ‘Get back to ‘Cisco Gargan, we can handle it!’ The time bender nodded, fading into air. ‘Are you certain that is a wise choice Logan?’ his clone asked, going back to back. ‘If they got us here, they’ll get us back home to!’ Logan replied, deflecting a bullet. ‘We kill those buggers and hitch a ride back ho-‘ They both cried out in pain, a female figure with red armour and a sphere off glass around her approaching, lightning coming out of her hands. ‘Bastion told us you would come….trust me, your friend didn’t get far.’ She grinned with glee. ‘Who….’ Logan fell on his knees, looking up. ‘My name is Caidena, the leader of the children, and you are-‘ The glass shattered, the lightning stopped as Caidena feel to the ground, a large hole in her forehead. The two mutants glanced to their right, disbelieving what they saw. Deadpool used a stolen sniper rifle and killed the dreaded foe in one shot. ‘Boom headshot!’ the merc cheered. Wolverine glanced at his clone, she returning the look. Without any words they got up, finishing off the last of them. Loam panted for air, returning back to his human form. ‘The hell is wrong with you people…?’ he inhaled deeply, catching his breath. ‘You killed them like cattle!’ ‘All in a day’s work Loamy old chum.’ Deadpool grinned behind his mask, leaning the gun on his shoulder. ‘We need to return to the Head quarters.’ X-23 said, snikting her claws away. ‘And find Gargan, they said he didn’t get far, so I’m guessing a anti teleport field, so there must be still some left who we can steal a plane from.’ Wolverine replied. ‘We find Gargan, we find a plane, go home.’ Loam regained his breath. ‘Sounds easy enough….’ ‘Hey, I bet three to one our buts get kicked back home!’ Deadpool reloaded his weapons. ‘Come on, Three to one!’ San Francesco 17.46 local time Cyclops aimed his optic blast at Perro, the tall villain blown away. ‘Brooke get the baby out now!’ he shouted. ‘Emma, can you hear me?!’ ‘I’m right here darling!’ his lover replied, her diamond form punching the life out of her foes. ‘Take the students to the panic room, me and Hank will hold them off!’ ‘Poofy!’ Becca cried, reaching for her father. ‘Daddy will be back soon pumpkin.’ Jason kissed his daughter’s forehead. ‘Get out of here Brooke go!’ he shouted, charging off into the fray. Brooke ran as fast as she could, dodging debris left and right, going for the basement. She ran for the stairs below, but two more soldiers dropped down from the burning ceiling. ‘The child, get her, kill the girl!’ one shouted, ailing his weapon. Brooke raised her hand, trying to use her powers, but the enxt thing she could smell was sulphur, and see a puff of smoke. She and Becca coughed, wiping her eyes. ‘What…?’ she asked herself. ‘There isn’t much time Fraulien Davis!’ She glanced up, despite the tears in her eyes being able to see the form of a blue furred demon of sorts. ‘Uncie Kurt!’ The little girl smiled, reaching for her. ‘Kurt, close the door!’ Brooke recognised that voice. She wiped her eyes, noticing she was in one of the smaller X-jets, Qwerty being behind the controls. Training taking back over, Brooke placed Becca in her seat. ‘Seatbelts.’ The girl smiled, putting her seatbelts on. ‘Now we’re safe.’ ‘Dorathe explorer Is good for something after all.’ Brooke chuckled weakly, sitting next to Becca. Kurt closed the door, the ship flying directly out of the hanger. ‘What about the others?’ Kurt ported next to Qwerty, co-piloting the ship. ‘Miss Frost told us to go!’ Qwerty replied. ‘Go where?’ ‘Avengers Tower, New York…’ ‘Mein got….’ Kurt glanced over the window, the Hq being completely in ruins. ‘I hope the professor is all right….’ Qwerty mentioned his mentor, Beast. So the jet flew off, being followed by those who could fly. Ecuador coast 15 minutes after crash. ‘Wake up mutant!’ a stern female voice slapped George across the cheek. The time bender opend his eyes, beholding the scarred face of the Leper Queen. ‘Jesus lady…..’ he said. ‘Your ugly.’ ‘Shut up!’ she shouted, slapping him again. ‘Do not let your personal feelings get between our goal Leper Queen.’ Bastion stepped up next to her. ‘No Bastion…’ she replied humbly. ‘Heya Toasty.’ George looked up, spitting the blood away. ‘You have another test subject, let’s see how it works.’ Bastion replied, looking down on the Queen. She grinned. ‘This will be good…’ George tried to break free, noticing to late he was strapped to a chair, his powers negated by the anti teleport field. ‘Hope this will make you suffer mutant….’ She grinned, jabbing the needle filled with the Legacy virus in George’s neck. ‘Argh!’ George cried out in pain, shivering heavily. ‘Let’s see how well this new strain works…’ Bastion de-activated the field. George stopped shivering, shrugging it off. ‘What?!’ Leper Queen shouted. ‘It cant be, he’s supposed to be dying!’ ‘Unless…’ Bastion pondered. ‘I’m not a mutant.’ George grinned, disappearing. The guards around them loaded their weapons. ‘He’s unarmed and alone, don’t be stupid.’ She glared at her men. ‘This can not be possible.’ Bastion checked his databases. ‘in all my logs George Gargan has always been part of the X-men, hence a mutant…’ ‘It seems your databases are wrong Bastion…’ the queen replied. ‘No matter, he will die anyway-‘ ‘Argh!’ Everyone looked back, one of the guards collapsing on the ground, his combat knives missing. ‘This experiment has lost all meaning, retreat.’ Bastion ordered his men, moving outside. However, more guards fell to the ground, stabbed in the chest or back. They open fire at random, Leper Queen and Bastion keep walking. George appeared in front of them, kicking Bastion in the face mid-air. ‘Gotchca!’ the time bender shouted, porting off again after a few knife jabs. Bastion paused, raising his arm. He realised a plasma bolt, hitting George wherever he was. ‘We return to our primary objective…’ Bastion said to his minion. ‘Find the girl , she’s on the run..’ The two villains walked into the jungle, the sounds of a jet plane filling the jungle. ‘Gargan!’ George slowly got up, the rest of the team running towards him. Loam helped him up. ‘You all right mate?’ ‘Yeh, I was all crickey you know.’ George grinned. ‘He’s fine…’ Tony groaned. ‘What happened Gargan?’ Wolverine asked. ‘They are diving us Logan.’ George replied. ‘They are going after Becca.’ ‘Becca, you mean Minotaur’s kid?’ Tony asked. ‘that doesn’t make any bloody sense!’ ‘I know…we need to get back to San Francesco.’ ‘And I got just the idea!’ Deadpool said, grabbing his cellphone. ‘We need air power now!’ he shouted, much to the confusion of the group. ‘The hell is he doing?’ loam asked. ‘No idea….’ George replied. ‘This day sucks…’ Shortly after however, a other jet flies in, brandishing Deadpool’s logo. ‘You got a friggin’ ship?’ Logan growled at Deadpool. ‘Well duh, who hasn’t?’ ‘How did you get a jet, I mean, your always poor.’ George scratched his head. ‘Oh, a friend made it.’ The merc replied, the jet landing. ‘I think you might know her.’ ‘Her?’ George raised a eyebrow. When the backdoor opened, he gasped. ‘Kim?!’ he shouted at the sight of his wife at the pilot seat. ‘Hey hun.’ She smiled. ‘Suit up, we’re going back to San Franseco.’ ‘But, how, did, wha..?’ ‘Come on George…’ Logan dragged his friend along. The ship took off, going back to the states. San Franseco Cerebro Molly used her last bits of water, freezing the blast doors shut. ‘That’ll keep them from entering the room Mister Summers.’ She said. ‘Good, we need to bides much time as we can.’ Scott commented. ‘Emma, you got contact with the teams?’ Emma concentrated. ’Yes…I can sense them, Kurt and his team are almost near the safe point.’ ‘You never told me you had a safe point.’ Scott said. ‘I know, I will explain later, but right now, I need to make a phone call….’ ‘Can you hear me?’ she asked the person she was in contact to via telepathy. ‘Yes I can miss Frost, and don’t worry I assembled most of my team to protect your little friend.’ The voice replied. ‘After all…we’re here to Avenge your kind.’ TBC |
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| Anne | May 7 2009, 01:45 PM Post #64 |
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New X-Man
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Fantastic as always! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
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| Gorvar | May 15 2009, 01:48 AM Post #65 |
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Next chapter later up today. Also i'm starting a new topic with the collected previous story arcs. |
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| Gorvar | May 15 2009, 04:37 PM Post #66 |
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Closing the Vault’ Part 3 of 4. Written by Gorvar Edited by Templedog Unique forum Characters created by Templedog, Gorvar, Brian Knippenberg and Anne. X-men and other Marvel characters belong to Marvel. Earth’s only hope is something Spectacular. Team Roster Anthony Durgrath aka Loam: can turn himself into the element earth. George Gargan aka Time-Warrior: limited manipulation of space and time. Aurick Taylor aka Qwerty: ability to hack and control any computer system. Brooke Davis aka Tranq: can calm down the enemy into a false sense of security. Gabriel Harrison aka Bolgani: can turn into a great white ape. Jason Traq aka Minotaur: Can turn into a beast with incredible power. Molly Dylan aka Sprite: Can manipulate water. Logan aka Wolverine: adamantium claws and healing factor Hank Mccoy aka Beast: Genius intellect and acrobatic skills. Laura aka X-23: Clone of wolverine with same skills Wade Wilson aka Deadpool: Mercenary with healing factor. Becca Traq: Targeted by the Purifier/ Children of the Vault alliance. What happened previously: Recently dangerous super powered weapons appeared all over New York, their new owners wrecking havoc. The New avengers found the source off the supplies, discovering most of the new weapons were armours from the Children of the Vault, a enemy the X-men thought to have dealt with a year ago. Despite Cyclops’s objections, a group of x-men (Time-Warrior, Wolverine, X-23, Loam and Deadpool) went to investigate a clue leading to Ecuador. The moment the group left however, the dark alliance of the Children and the Purifiers attacked the X-men hq in San Francesco, apparently targeting Becca, a young mutant girl and daughter of Jason Traq aka Minotaur. Thankfully Nightcrawler, Tranq and Qwerty were able to fly the child to safety, but the evil alliance followed them. Back in Ecuador George Gargan got captured and injected with the Legacy Virus, Bastion planning to use him as a mutant bomb, however the plan backfired when it was revealed George isn’t a mutant. Gathering back with the team, wolverine’s strike force is en route to San Francesco. Meanwhile Emma Frost contacts a unknown ally of hers, asking his aid to protect Becca. Closing the Vault Part 3: Dark Allies and Righteous foes Us airspace 18.30 Local time ‘Summers, you there, Summers?’ Logan growled, shutting off the communicator. ‘Nothin…’ ‘Something must’ve happened when we were gone.’ Loam concluded, leaning on Logan’s chair. ‘No sh*t Sherlock.’ George bandaged his arms. ‘No cursing on my ship George.’ His wife glared at him. ‘Yes dear.’ He nodded sheepishly. ‘….Leash dude, leash.’ Deadpool pointed between the two. ‘Right there.’ ‘Anybody got a id-ARGH!’ Wolverine shouted, in unison with everyone on the plane. ‘sorry for the headaches children, but I don’t have much time.’ The voice in their heads said. ‘Glad ta hear your still with us Emma.’ Tony rubbed his temples. ‘What’s the problem?’ Wolverine asked, co-piloting with Kimberley. ‘The Purifiers and the Children attacked the base when your force left, they were after Becca.’ ‘The kid?’ George asked. ‘Why would they go after her?’ ‘Don’t know, but if they rather chase her then kill us, it must be very important.’ Emma replied. ‘George, Scott wants you and Deadpool to go to New York, you need to stall them until Becca is in safe hands.’ ‘All right, suicide mission, I love those!’ Deadpool shouted with glee. ‘I’ll send the co-ordinates in your head, they should be there in 5 minutes.’ George grabbed his head, the pain increasing with every bot of information Emma sends to him. ‘Got it….’ George replied. ‘You ready Wade?’ Deadpool reloaded his weapons. ‘Let’s go, Leeroooy Jenki-‘ In a blink of a eye, the two were gone. In the back, one could faintly hear Laura sigh of relief. ‘What about the rest of us Emma?’ Logan asked. ‘You get back to the base, we need your help digging out of the Cerebra room.’ ‘On our way.’ Kimberley sighed, the ship flying straight for San Francesco. Meanwhile in New York Avengers Tower The X-jet landed on the rooftop, Brooke walking out first, holding Becca’s little hand. Nightcrawler bamf-ed out, scouting ahead. ‘Nothing…’ he noticed. ‘The computers say they’re in.’ Qwerty stepped out, looking up to the Watchtower of the Sentry.’ holy…’ he muttered. Brooke took Becca up, holding her. ‘We need to get isndie, I’m sure those creeps can be here any second.’ Beofre the team could reply, small explosions occurred around them, several children of the vault appearing, among them Perro. ‘To late.’ He grinned. ‘Hand us the child over, or else!’ Nightcrawler wanted to teleport, but got shot in the shoulder by a sharpshooter from far behind. ‘Kurt!’ Tranq shouted, Becca crying louder. Perro grinned, but his grin faded as a few seconds passed. ‘Sniper, why haven’t you fired,’ he shouted. ‘Sniper!’ As he glanced over to the position of the sniper, his eyes widened. He could zoom in thanks to the modifications in his glasses they gave him, and what he saw wasn’t encouraging. His sniper teams were all dead, throats and chests sliced open, the last one‘s head got severed by…Wolverine? ‘I thought Wolverine was being taken care of!’ perro shouted to the Purfier enxt to him. ‘He is!’ the Purifier replied. ‘He’s sup-‘ A arrow hit the human straight in the right eye socket, blood and bits of skull flying everywhere. Before the others could see where it came from, a large Black monster jumped down, punching and devouring the villains. The creature roared with joy, his arms changing into teeth shaped tentacles. ‘Back-up, we need back-up!’ Perro shouted, charging in. The X-men turned back to the X-jet, but a voice boomed above them. ‘Don’t worry…’ it said. The mutants looked up, a Iron Man with a star painted on it’s chest flying above them. ‘The avengers are here to help. Meanwhile, 10 kilometres away. The Reptillian faced Child heard his brother’s plea for aid. ‘Understood brother, we’ll come to hel-‘ a barrage of bullets interrupted the sentence, cutting the Child down. As his brothers and allies looked up, the bullets were replaced with swords, two individuals appearing from out of nowhere, cutting them down. As the two went back to back, their enemies circling around them, the one wearing a red costume started to sing. ‘Bad boys, bad boys, whatcha gonna do, whatcha gonna do when we come for you?’ he put his swords away, aiming his uzi’s at his foes. ‘Bad boys, bad boys, whatcha gonna do, whatcha do when we come for you?!’ ‘You suck at singing Wade…’ TW replied, his swords aimed at the nearest foes. ‘That isn’t what Simon Cowell said….after I shot him in the knee five times.’ ‘What?’ ‘What?’ ‘Get them!’ A puffier shouted, leading the attack on the two mutant sympathisers. San Francesco X-men Headquarters ‘You all right kid?’ Logan asked, helping Molly get out of the rubble. ‘Yeah I’m fine…’ Molly replied. ‘Nobody got badly hurt.’ ‘Speak for yourself…’ Tony moved another boulder. Cyclops got out, Emma not far behind. ‘Logan, we don’t have much time.’ ‘Figures…’ Logan sighed. ‘What’s the game plan slim?’ ‘Emma was able to read the mind of a Purifier during the attack.’ Cycops replied. ‘The new armour the Children use are all connected to one distributor, if we take that out, the Children wont have any power left.’ ‘Just one?’ Logan frowned. ‘Aint that a bit stupid?’ ‘We fought Evil Alien Warlords who build their citadel on a tunnel straight to the centre of their planet Logan, by now it should make sense.’ ‘Course…’ Wolverine sighed. ‘Where and who else is comin’?’ ‘You, Sprite, Bolgani, Minotaur and Loam, rest of us will stay here until Becca comes back from wheverever she is, location is New Mexico.’ ‘You didn’t tell him where she is Frost?’ Logan glanced over to the White Queen. ‘You keep secrets from me, so can I.’ she replied. ‘Now is not the time Emma….’ Cyclops said. ‘It’s only for our own safety dear.’ She retorted. ‘You two go play House, I’m goin’ to shut off that distributor.’ Logan put his mask back on. ‘Any idea why they’re after Jason’s kid?’ ‘Some prophecy.’ Emma answered. ‘But I couldn’t get more out of him, they were Psi shielded.’ ‘Course.’ Logan nodded and went off. Kimberley stepped out of the ship, blinking at the X-men entering it. ‘What’s going on?’ she asked. ‘We’re stealing your ship luv.’ Loam stepped in. ‘Oh, are you Miss Smith, Mister Gargan’s wife?’ Bolgani asked. ‘Urghm….yes.’ Kimberley blinked. ‘He told us much about you.’ Molly smiled. ‘Tells us you keep him going when the chips are down.’ ‘That’s nice of him.’ She smiled. ‘But it doesn’t save him from getting me worrid every day.’ ‘Kimberley!’ Logan shouted, throwing a can of soft drink over to her. ‘New Mexico.’ ‘You know I’m going to send you guys the fuel bill, right?’ she grinned, closing the door when Logan entered. ‘Summers got a few mile to spare.’ Logan replied, sitting in the co-pilot seat. ‘Everybody strap in!’ Meanwhile Kebab shop 6 kilometres from Avengers Tower. The two costumed heroes sat, eating their kebabs, drawing the eye from a few perplexed New Yorkers. ‘You know….’ Deadpool said, drinking some water to wash their spiciness away.’ Kebabs are the key to a healthy healing factor.’ ‘Really now?’ George replied. ‘Thought they were the shortcut to the bathroom?’ ‘No, that’s Taco Bell, trust me.’ The Merc replied. ‘Evening Gentlemen.’ Emma’s voice rang through their heads. ‘Holy God, is that you?’ deadpool asked. ‘Did you finally decided to give me that pony I asked for when I was 6?’ A awkward moment of silence passed. ‘What’s up Frost?’ George asked. ‘We need you to stop what your doing and head for avengers Tower, the battle isn’t over yet?’ ‘Avengers Tower?!’ both shouted. ‘Are you high?!’ ‘You have to, something big is heading your way, and it wants te child.’ ‘What do you mean, some-‘ The answer came in the form of a large shadow being cast on them and the streets around. The two ran outside, gasping at the sight. The windows shattered, the people began to run in panic, for they arrived….the Sentinels. ‘You know….’ Deadpool broke the silence. ‘I would go for a To Be Continued now.’ To Be Concluded. |
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| Gorvar | May 24 2009, 11:40 AM Post #67 |
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Closing the Vault’ Part 4 of 4. Written by Gorvar Edited by Templedog Unique forum Characters created by Templedog, Gorvar, Brian Knippenberg and Anne. X-men and other Marvel characters belong to Marvel. Earth’s only hope is something Spectacular. Team Roster Anthony Durgrath aka Loam: can turn himself into the element earth. George Gargan aka Time-Warrior: limited manipulation of space and time. Aurick Taylor aka Qwerty: ability to hack and control any computer system. Brooke Davis aka Tranq: can calm down the enemy into a false sense of security. Gabriel Harrison aka Bolgani: can turn into a great white ape. Jason Traq aka Minotaur: Can turn into a beast with incredible power. Molly Dylan aka Sprite: Can manipulate water. Logan aka Wolverine: adamantium claws and healing factor Hank Mccoy aka Beast: Genius intellect and acrobatic skills. Laura aka X-23: Clone of wolverine with same skills Wade Wilson aka Deadpool: Mercenary with healing factor. Becca Traq: Targeted by the Purifier/ Children of the Vault alliance. What happened previously: Recently dangerous super powered weapons appeared all over New York, their new owners wrecking havoc. The New avengers found the source off the supplies, discovering most of the new weapons were armours from the Children of the Vault, a enemy the X-men thought to have dealt with a year ago. Despite Cyclops’s objections, a group of x-men (Time-Warrior, Wolverine, X-23, Loam and Deadpool) went to investigate a clue leading to Ecuador. The moment the group left however, the dark alliance of the Children and the Purifiers attacked the X-men hq in San Francesco, apparently targeting Becca, a young mutant girl and daughter of Jason Traq aka Minotaur. Thankfully Nightcrawler, Tranq and Qwerty were able to fly the child to safety, but the evil alliance followed them. Back in Ecuador George Gargan got captured and injected with the Legacy Virus, Bastion planning to use him as a mutant bomb, however the plan backfired when it was revealed George isn’t a mutant. Gathering back with the team, wolverine’s strike force was en route to San Francesco when Emma Frost contacted the team and advised the group’s porters, Time-Warrior and Deadpool, should go ahead to slow the mutant hating foes down. The remaining members and half the Spectacular X-men are sent to New Mexico to destroy the sole distributor of the new Armour of the children is located. In New York the Team that took Becca away were ambushed by Perro and his group, until help arrived out of a dark corner… But will the Dark Avengers stand ready to help the X-men against the Sentinels? Closing the Vault Part 4: Mechanical difficulties. New York [Mutant sympathisers located, Terminate with extreme prejudice.] a robotic voice boomed high above. In unison the three Sentinels landed in the middle of the street, opening fire on the two heroes. Tw raised his hands, sending the projectiles back to the mechanical foes. ‘I hate robots….’ George growled, grabbing his swords from it’s scabbards. ‘And I hate the fact that they cancelled Golden girls, but you don’t see me crying.’ Deadpool replied, grabbing his Uzi’s and opening fire. ‘Any ideas?’ ‘One…’ George replied, porting ahead, stabbing his swords into the Sentinel’s neck. ‘Oh, I like that plan.’ Wade replied, putting his guns away. He grabbed a remote from his belt, pressing a button. In a flash he disappeared, only to re-appear on a other Sentinel. ‘Who likes snacks?!’ he threw one in. ‘you do!’ The Merc with a mouth disappeared again, the Sentinel exploding. Tw downed his foe, popping up next to Deadpool, out of breath. ‘What kind of Grenade did you use?’ George coughed. ‘Acme Grenades, duh!’ The time bender grinned, taking a few easy breaths. ‘One more.’ ‘Let’s do it.’ Deadpool grabbed his katana. ‘Let’s make Kill Bill look foolish!’ New Mexico The ship hovered above a seemingly abandoned warehouse, it’s stealth field still on while the team prepared themselves. ‘Alright folks, listen up.’ Wolverine put his normal costume on, the X-force one being to torn to be of any use. ‘We go in, destroy the darn thing and get out, no heroics.’ ‘Sounds like a good idea.’ Tony cracked his knuckles.’ Any idea of resistance?’ ‘Does a sh*t load suffice fer a answer aussi?’ Logan grinned, putting his mask on. ‘It’ll do for now.’ Logan glanced at Jason, who was sat nerviously. ‘Wanna sit this one out Jason?’ Jason shook his head. ‘They came after my daughter…’ he glared. ‘I’ll make them pay.’ Logan nodded. ‘You two kids alright?’ ‘Ready when you are Logan.’ Molly replied, filling the last capsule on her belt with water. ‘Gabe?’ The Wakandaian simply nodded, putting his jacket on. ‘Right then…..Kim, open the door.’ ‘I have no parachutes.’ Kimberly blinked. ‘Who said we need em?’ In the warehouse the reptilian child of the vault called Aqua, crossed his arms, awaiting word from his brothers or sisters. ‘Still nothing…’ a human woman wearing a mask sighed, sitting by the radio. ‘No word on my people or yours…something must’ve gone wrong.’ ‘what do you sssugesst?’ Aqua asked. ‘We call back.’ She replied. ‘Don’t care what your boss or mine says, its to dangerious to stay here, dissasem-‘ The roof exploded, Wolverine, his claws already up, fell in, his claws meeting a guard immediately. ‘It’ss the X-men!’ Aqua shouted, charging towards the lone Canadian, meeting upon a fist punch from Loam’s metallic hand. ‘The one and only lad!’ The Australian replied. ‘And mind you, you smell worse then Tiger Shark, and that’s saying something!’ Minotaur broke through another part of the roof, his monstrous form tearing through the guards as if made of leaves. ‘You came after my daughter, YOU CAME AFTER BECCA!’ He roared on the top of his lungs. Bolgani swung down, using the debris as a ladder of sorts, carrying Spite on his back. ‘Thanks for the lift dear.’ Molly pecked her boyfriend’s cheek, jumping down. She landed on her feet, directly opening two capsules of water. Out of them sprout two large tentacles made of water, slapping the few guards left down. ‘Molly, take that thing out now!’ Logan shouted, slicing Leper Queen’s gun in half. ‘Gotcha!’ Molly replied, soaking the machine in water. ‘Nooooooo’ Aqua shouted, the lights on his armor dimming as the machine shook heavily. ‘Fall back!’ The Queen shouted, taking Wolverine out with a clean head shot, retreating with Aqua. ‘Well….that was un eventful.’ Bolgani turned back to his human form, helping Logan up. ‘Summers, we got the distributor out.’ Loam said through his cell phone. ‘Good job, but it isn’t over yet, go to New york, we got trouble.’ ‘How much Trouble Cyke…?’ Wolverine regained his balance. ‘A 100 of them.’ New York. Perro gasped for air, Daken’s bone claws close to his throat. ‘Want me to put him out of his misery Osborn?’ Daken asked. ‘No, not yet, he could prove to be useful.’ The Iron Patriot replied. ‘I..will tell you….nothing.’ Perro grinned ‘Alright.’ Daken raised his hand. ‘I said no Daken.’ Norman put Daken’s arm down. ‘Miss Hand this is Iron Patriot, we need a Prisoner transport for-‘ ‘Oh mein god, look!’ Kurt shouted, pointing in the distance. Norman activated his binoculars, blinking at the sight. ‘Iron Patriot, this is Miss Hand, what’s going on in there?’ the voice on the other end asked. ‘Get me Ares and Sentry, I want them 20 minutes ago. ‘What for, I read no enemy life signs in your area.’ ‘Switch over to mechanical signs.’ .’Mister Osborn….what am I reading?’ ‘Sentinels, a 100 of them.’ He replied. ‘Bloody Sentinels?’ Hawkeye asked, wlaking passed Qwerty bandaging Nightcrawler. ‘Why the bloody hell are they here for?’ ‘’Becca…’ Brooke replied. ‘They’re here for her.’ ‘Simple enough isn’t it.’ Hawkeye grinned. ‘We give her to them and we-‘ ‘No, we don’t. Bullseye, Mac, Daken, your with me.’ The former green goblin said with a stern voice. ‘You four get the hell out of here.’ The four X-men nodded as the Dark Avengers went off. ‘Wasn’t that Mister gargan’s father?’ Qwerty pointed to Venom. ‘Come on.’ Kurt got up. ‘we don’t have much time left.’ The Dark Avengers went over the rooftops, attacking the Sentinels and the Purifier footmen nearby. Daken leaped in, his bone claws already out, slicing the mutant hating zealots. ‘Hungry…’ Venom growled, devouring his foes. ‘Seems your off alone with the giant zords boss.’ Bullseye drew his arrows, shooting away. ‘I don’t want any civilian casualties by your hand, got it?’ Iron Patriot shouted, firing his laser rounds at the nearest robot. ‘No civilian casualties, I’m looking at you Bullseye!!’ ‘Got it..’ Daken withdrew his claws from a body, going on to the next one. Despite the scents of blood, terror and urine around him, he could smell something else… ‘Norman, we got two other scents here….one of em is Time-Warrior.’ ‘Figures he would be here….Purifiers are the target people.’ ‘But Boss, I thought George was-‘ bullseye asked. ‘Purifiers are the target.’ IP interrupted. ‘We need to leave Aurick, what’s taking so long?’ Brooke held a crying Becca, who was crying from all the commotion. ‘The fight damaged the engines, I cant get it working!’ Qwerty replied. ‘It’ll take to long for me to fix it.’ ‘Stealth field?’ Kurt asked. ‘Battery is fried, if we activate it, the ship will blow up to bits.’ ‘Then we can only sit…and pray…’ Kurt sighed. Becca stopped crying, clapping. ‘Poofy!’ The three X-men turned over to see the little girl. ‘Poofy’ she shouted with glee, looking above. ‘There’s nothing there…’ Brooke pointed out. ‘There is.’ Qwerty grinned, sensing it. Suddenly, a ship appeared out of nowhere, the cargo bay door in the back opening. ‘Elf, get the kid in here now!’ Logan shouted over the sound of the engines. ‘Mein freund!’ Kurt shouted with glee. ‘Becca!’ Jason shouted. ‘Poofy!’ Becca shouted back, stretching her arms to the ship. ‘Hold on.’ Kurt said, porting the kid and Brooke to the ship, porting up Qwerty a bit later. ‘Guys, company!’ Loam shouted, pointing to a lone Sentinel coming at them. ‘Don’t worry.’ Kimberley grinned, turning the ship around to face it. She pushed a button, the ship shook as canons came out of it on both sides. Without any wearing the ship shot the Sentinel down. ‘Yes, I am a genius.’ ‘Well then Genius, get us to the fighting.’ Logan closed the door. ‘Gargan and Wilson need our help….cant believe I said that.’ ‘Who is this ‘Deadpool’ anyway?’ Molly asked. ‘Less ya know the better kid.’ Loam replied. Jason held his duahgter close to him, crying with joy. ‘Thank you Brooke…’ he looked up at rhe blonde. ‘Thank you so much..’ Brooke smiled and nodded. ‘Your welcome.’ The ship flew off towards the fight, re-activating the stealth shield. ‘Least we don’t stick out as a sore thumb now.’ Gabe said, looking over the window. ‘Who’s going in?’ ‘Me and Loam, rest of ya go back to San Francesco.’ ‘What?’ Molly blinked. ‘Are you going to bench us?’ ‘These aint super powered people you can talk out of Molly, these ere Sentinels.’ Loam replied with a gruff voice. ‘They kill you in one hit.’ ‘That’s right.’ Logan SNIKT his claws up. ‘Open the door.’ Kimberley nodded, opening the cargo bay door. ‘Let’s do this…’ Wolverine and Loam jumped out, taking out a Sentinel together. ‘Ah Logan, good of you to join the party!’ Deadpool shouted, firing away with purifier weapons. ‘Where’s Gargan, Wilson?!’ Wolverine sliced a Sentinels kneecap in half. ‘Dunno, lost track of him after a mob of them attacked us, got fancy toys out of it though.’ ‘Friggin’ beautiful….’ Loam groaned, his concrete form punching away. ‘Stay focused Loam!’ wolverine shouted. George’ swords were covered in blood and oil, half his uniform torn away. He didn’t see Deadpool for 10 minutes, which meant bad news for George. A grenade was thrown, exploding in front of George. Tw fell down, being at the mercy of the mutant hating zealots. ‘Traitor..’ One of them cursed, aiming his rifle at George’s head. The sounds of fear and anger brought George back as a large black monster appeared, killing the mob of zealots. Time-Warrior started at the creature, and it at him. ‘Dad…’ George calmly said. ‘Son…’ the creature replied, going off. ‘Gargan!’ Logan shouted in the distance, coming at him.’ you all right bub?!’ ‘I’m fine!’ George shouted, running towards them. ‘Good, cause we’re getting’ out of here.’ Logan pointed to the Sentry and Ares flying towards the remaining Sentinels. (Sounds like a plan, hang on.’ George said and ported the 3 X-men and the insane Merc out. San Franseco War room. ‘So…what have we learned?’ Scott Summers asked the people in the meeting. ‘The Children of the vault and the Purifiers are interested in the girl.’ George answered. ‘But the Question is, why?’ ‘I believe the same reason why they were interested in the baby’ (Read Messiah Complex) Beast speculated. ‘They have seen the future, and it isn’t the future they want.’ ‘So….my daughter is a target now?’ Jason asked, holding his little girl in his arms. ‘She’s a target the moment she was born bub.’ Logan sipped from his beer. ‘But we’ll protect her an’ you.’ ‘But the first thing we need to do is find out why she is dangerous to our enemies.’ Cyclops said. ‘Launching a attack on New York and San Francesco is very desperate of them.’ He continued. ‘We’ll find them, and root them out.’ The End. |
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| Gorvar | Jun 1 2009, 03:15 AM Post #68 |
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Posted the collected storyline, check it out. http://forums.wolverinefiles.com/topic/1698285/1/ Edited by Gorvar, Jun 1 2009, 03:16 AM.
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| Gorvar | Jul 11 2009, 02:28 PM Post #69 |
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Right everyone, sorry about not posting any new chapters for the apst few months, but i was really busy and out of inspiration. but since it's Summer, i got a sh*t load of enw comics and Dvd's, you can expect a new storyline here soon. in the mean time if your intrested, check the past 2 storylines in a colelcted form here in this sub-section of the forum to enjoy my horrible writing. |
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| Gorvar | Nov 20 2009, 04:15 PM Post #70 |
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